by Rae Elliott | Oct 26, 2017 | Blog
“The narrator’s voice is your greatest asset– and your greatest drawback.” – Orson Scott Card Choosing the narrative voice for your novel determines who the reader will sympathize with. That means the entire story hangs on the choice of your narrative voice. It can be very difficult to choose the right narrator for your book especially if you aren’t sure what each voice truly does. I don’t know about you, but trying to figure out the difference between the narrative options gave me a headache for years. But after intense reading and research, I discovered the gold points every author should know and needs to know to properly identify the narrative voice. If you’re reading this now, it’s because you want to figure out what those narrative voice options are and which you should choose for your story. So, let’s break down what your three options as a fiction writer are and how these voices work: 1. Omniscient Third Person Narrator The omniscient third-person narrator flits like an invisible bird from place to place, sharing a distant, unemotional perspective of each character’s POV. Orson Scott Card put it best when he said, “The O.T.P narrator sees the world through the wrong end of the binoculars– readers can see everything but it all looks very small and far away.” We sit back and watch the lives play out from a distance as if we are a “god” looking down on the lives of mortals. There’s no emotional attachment, simply straightforward presentation of the facts. We watch what the characters do, we don’t experience it. Easiest way to identify...
by Rae Elliott | Sep 16, 2017 | Blog
Yesterday, I took a walk through my favorite park- the park my parents have taken me to since I was a small child. I’ve walked through this gorgeous tree-peppered park about a thousand times. Every river, rock-laden path, golden field, tree tattooed with random initials I thought I knew like the back of my hand. After all, twenty-seven years should grant a girl the confidence of being an expert on her childhood park. But yesterday, everything changed. I discovered something brand new, and it blew me away. What did I discover? And why did I discover it just now? Why didn’t I discover it, say, fifteen years ago? Well, stay tuned for the answers, friend. For now, I want you to think about your life in a similar light. You’ve walked the same paths a thousand times over. Your daily routine, your schedule- it’s all been one reliable beat- no surprises (or at least, you hope for none). So why are you here, reading this post right now? Something drew you to this page. Something inside you is yearning for a change in the status quo, some little voice inside is crying out. So what is it crying out for? Discovery. Humans are in a constant state of change no matter how much we ignore it or don’t see it. It’s only when that little voice inside becomes so overwhelmingly loud that you finally realize you need a change- a revolution within. You wish to branch out into uncharted territory and discover a new aspect of yourself. Can I be a writer? How do I even begin this journey? I don’t know how to...
by Rae Elliott | Jul 4, 2017 | Blog
So, I have to let you in on a little secret: I’ve been battling a regularly occurring illness for some time now, and it totally sucks. There are some days that my body is in so much pain, I can hardly move from my bed at all. Then, there are days when I am working full speed and winning at life like a champ. What I’ve discovered is this: modesty and a little routine called “counting my strengths” keeps me motivated to write and just be a human on my toughest days. Are you coping with a serious illness too? Are you undergoing regularly occurring health problems that throw your life-train off the tracks too? Just know that you’re not alone. Know that your struggle is not in vain. Also, know that you’re courageous as heck and you’re capable of, not just coping with your illness, but living your life despite the pain. For those of you who may not suffer illness, I’ll tell you honestly that it feels like the heaviest ball and chain, or the most frustrating prison in the world. You feel like you have no control and that’s the hardest part of all. These simple things that we all take for granted are taken away from you: Freedom Independence Energy Strength Social life Productivity Focus And sometimes, even more than that. For me, it has even greatly affected my workflow and my time spent writing. See, when you’re suffering illness, you don’t want to acknowledge that you’re not quite the same person any longer. Anything that acknowledges your weakened state may trigger all sorts of fears. At least, it did for me. First, I became forced to accept my limitations....
by Rae Elliott | Jun 14, 2017 | Blog
Why do female villains tend to act and look the same? Why don’t we take female villains seriously? Why do so few female villains actually terrify us? Male villains have made a 180 degree turn over the last few years. That guy with the curly mustache who ties the damsel to the train tracks simply doesn’t cut it anymore. Villains like Heath Ledger’s Joker, James Moriarty, and others have revolutionized evil. On the other hand, female villains haven’t evolved equally. If we think about the classic line-up of female villains, they share about 3 similarities: They wear the same ridiculous, theatrical or super sexy get-up meant to focus all attention on their hot bod instead of their personal goal. They have the same “I’M PURE EVIL!” laughter. They use overtly sexualized “tricks up their sleeves” to get the job done. But worst of all, villainesses tend to lack a profound motive which makes their personal conflict seem more like a hissy fit instead of a threat to be taken seriously. In fact, villainesses tend to be given the same three motives for their actions: Petty revenge Spurned or unrequited love Jealousy But what’s so wrong about these motives anyway? In it of itself, those motives aren’t completely heinous but when villainesses are consistently put into these three categories and not much else, then we have a problem. How? Because these motives narrow her potential, trivialize her goals, and worst of all, they create a caricature of evil. Now granted, there are a few exceptions that we could stand to learn from. First, there’s Stephen King’s crazed super-fan, Annie Wilkes, played by the master, Kathy Bates. Then there’s the bloodthirsty...
by Rae Elliott | May 21, 2017 | Blog
If you missed the start of this countdown, then I highly suggest you first read the first and second post right here: Why are the last posts so valuable to you today? In the first post, we learned the 5 types of villains most commonly found in fiction In the previous post, we learned the 4 four most powerful weapons all great villains use And finally, we learned numbers 10 through 5 on my ultimate naughty list You’ll be shocked who ranks in! So please, have a read at my previous post before we learn the do’s and don’ts for a villain’s origin story, and find out numbers 4-1 on my top villains of all time list. But hey- if you’re ahead of the game and have last week’s post already under your belt, then congrats! You get to move on to the final round. The best way to encourage readers to invest in your villain is by revealing the villain’s origin story. However, introducing it the wrong way can create a massive wall between your readers and your story. Or worse yet, your villain’s origin story could be so over-the-top or unrealistic that it gags the reader. So, how do you craft an origin story that doesn’t induce an eye-roll from your readers so intense they can see their brain stem? There are some common mistakes authors fall victim to when revealing their villain’s origin story. So we will discuss a few don’ts to avoid and a few do’s to adhere to. These key tips will ask readers to invest in your villain and care about (or at least pay attention to) his journey. And most importantly, they will keep...